This is well-written, in terms of content and a sincere attempt has been made at character development. The ending is abrupt, though not by design I suspect. Some simple grammatical errors are present, but forgivable. Overall, I would like to read more from this author.
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This is well-written, in terms of content and a sincere attempt has been made at character development. The ending is abrupt, though not by design I suspect. Some simple grammatical errors are present, but forgivable. Overall, I would like to read more from this author.
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